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I lifted the rock in the corner, and took the half-empty pack of Marlboros into my hand.  My fingers trembled as I took a cigarette from the pack.  I haven’t smoked in months…  I light up, the smoke floats from the blackening tip.  I raise the filter to my lips, and breathe in.  I feel the smoke engulf my lungs, my throat goes dry.  I exhale, releasing every bit of the gray cloud, before taking another drag.
Well, i wrote this a while ago..
And i wanted to post it, because it's sooo vivid.
I liked it.
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SRUJAL Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010
Holy smoke
Nice words :)
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brandonetaylor Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
Thank you! :)
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xBloddiedxWristsx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009   Writer
Snap :O Addiction much? I like it! It really gives you a good picture in your mind. :D
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brandonetaylor Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009
Hahah, thanks.
I have another "description practice" i might upload soon, it's about cutting...i like it a lot.
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xBloddiedxWristsx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009   Writer
Do upload :D
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brandonetaylor Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009
Haha, okayy.
I'll try and get it up soon..
There are two..ish.
I still have to choose which of the two.

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xBloddiedxWristsx Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009   Writer
Or you could upload both xD
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brandonetaylor Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009
Haha--maybe...
One is actually highly descriptive...
The other...is just good..
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